Hello! What a piece you have here! I honestly find the idea and the set up very cool, though it has some definitely noticeable technical issues that could've been avoided if a bit more time was worked into this.

First lets talk about the lighting! There are two noticeable problems I see in it as of right now, the first is how strong you actually made it! The way it reflects off of the various objects in the poster is very bright and waaaay too powerful. Not to mention there are some point where it cuts off, almost like it reached the edge of the light and just gave up. The second problem would have to be the volumetric light above the pone. Its far too yellow in color, which doesn't contrast well with the color scheme and its way too grainy!

The scene build itself is actually pretty good! Aside from a few errors here and there, like the fact that I can see inside the mesh of the novac sign.

As far as composition goes, it seems to want to focus on the pone, but the scene sort of picks up the attention more than the pony in the picture. When I look at this poster my eyes glance at the focus for a second and then immediately trails off towards the more interesting layout of the scene build. This kind of thing can make or break your poster, and given the fact that there are noticeable errors in the scene build it sorta breaks it.


Overall I really enjoy the idea of it, and you did a fine job on the scene, but your usage of bloom and lighting needs worked on quite a bit.

Good job! and I expect to see more of you c;